The bar chart shows the percentages in a survey’s result of resident’s coffee and tea drinking and buying habits in five Australian cities, namely, Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart in the last 4 weeks.
It is immediately apparent that the most anticipated habit of city residents is going to a café with a high percentage ranging from 60 to 64 in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart. For Brisbane and Adelaide, there is a substantial drop to 55 and 49 per cent, respectively.
By contrast, buying fresh coffee seems to be the least favorite habit according to residents who took part in the survey. The percentage in all five cities is under 50. Sydney takes the first place with around 45 per cent and Melbourne follows up with 43 per cent. For the three remaining cities, the percentage is all under 40.
In terms of buying instant coffee, the percentage varies between the previous categories. The highest percentage belongs to Hobart’s citizens, around 53 per cent. For Sydney, Melbourne and Brisbane, there is a gradual increase from 45 to 52 per cent. Although being the middle habit, the percentage of instant coffee consumed in Adelaide is higher than that of going to a café for merely 1 per cent.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60828717404 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504807692308 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 208.0 22.4926829268 925% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 988.0 112.824112599 876% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 208.0 22.9334400587 907% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157168375908 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157168375908 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132212572406 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120371485849 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 104.9 13.2329268293 793% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -122.72 61.2550243902 -200% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 82.0 10.3012195122 796% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.99 8.06136585366 211% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 85.2 10.9970731707 775% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.0658536585 497% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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