The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart demonstrates the data of ten different countries' expenditure of money for traveling purposes in 2014.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the Chinese people spent more money than all other countries, while Taiwan spent the least. In addition, Germany and the USA utilized the same amount of money.

To begin with the Asian countries, not only among the Asian countries but also compared with all countries, China spent the highest amount of money which was 110 billion dollars. Except for Singapore, all other countries spent below or equal to 20 billion dollars. 20 billion dollars were used to travel by both Hong Kong and South Korea, whereas only 10 billion was spent by Taiwan. Approximately, 15 and 17 billion were paid out by Malaysia and India respectively.

Turning to the other three countries, Germany and the USA both used 84 billion for traveling to other places and both remained in the second position in that case. According to this graph, the United Kingdom was the third country in the case of expenditure which used 55 billion in terms of visiting other places.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... demonstrates the data of ten different countries expenditure of money for traveling purp...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on in terms of visiting other places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, except for, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97340425532 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47131002624 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3525263612 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980878035217 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460904764943 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561162817472 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735212241199 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685133518357 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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