The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart below illustrates the amount of one country's exports in numerous groups during 2015 and 2016. The table provides the percentage change in each member regarding to exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
To begin with, in 2015 we can see that all of the categories decreased slightly. Petroleum products reached 60$ billions which is the highest among the others. Furthermore, in each categories we can see there are 2$ until 8$ billion decreasement. While, in 2016 Agricultural products and Textiles remain same. Petroleum products have higher value rather than Engineered goods, which we can see Petroleum reached around 62$ billions while Engineered arrived at 61$ billions. In addition, Gems and Jewellery have a slightly decreasement from around 42$ billions to 41$ billion.
The next, we can see from the table that every group excluding Gems and Jewellery have escalation in terms of percentage change in values; for example, textiles have the highest change that reached 15,24% while Agricultural products have the lowest change that achieved 0,81%. In contrast, Gems and Jewellery have degradation in percentage change, it reach out 5,18%.
Overall, Petroleum products and Engineered goods are the richest group.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... To begin with, in 2015 we can see that all of the categories decreased slightly. Petroleu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...ed slightly. Petroleum products reached 60$ billions which is the highest among the...
^^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...in each categories we can see there are 2$ until 8$ billion decreasement. While, i...
^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$8'.
Suggestion: $8
...ategories we can see there are 2$ until 8$ billion decreasement. While, in 2016 Ag...
^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$62'.
Suggestion: $62
...ich we can see Petroleum reached around 62$ billions while Engineered arrived at 61...
^^^
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$61'.
Suggestion: $61
...2$ billions while Engineered arrived at 61$ billions. In addition, Gems and Jewelle...
^^^
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$42'.
Suggestion: $42
...ave a slightly decreasement from around 42$ billions to 41$ billion. The next, w...
^^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$41'.
Suggestion: $41
...ecreasement from around 42$ billions to 41$ billion. The next, we can see from t...
^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...ve degradation in percentage change, it reach out 5,18%. Overall, Petroleum produc...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, regarding, well, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44270833333 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71688853101 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.1960209937 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228299317917 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107681507895 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138338629039 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168288811087 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2069404894 0.0819641961636 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... To begin with, in 2015 we can see that all of the categories decreased slightly. Petroleu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...ed slightly. Petroleum products reached 60$ billions which is the highest among the...
^^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...in each categories we can see there are 2$ until 8$ billion decreasement. While, i...
^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$8'.
Suggestion: $8
...ategories we can see there are 2$ until 8$ billion decreasement. While, in 2016 Ag...
^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$62'.
Suggestion: $62
...ich we can see Petroleum reached around 62$ billions while Engineered arrived at 61...
^^^
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$61'.
Suggestion: $61
...2$ billions while Engineered arrived at 61$ billions. In addition, Gems and Jewelle...
^^^
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$42'.
Suggestion: $42
...ave a slightly decreasement from around 42$ billions to 41$ billion. The next, w...
^^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$41'.
Suggestion: $41
...ecreasement from around 42$ billions to 41$ billion. The next, we can see from t...
^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...ve degradation in percentage change, it reach out 5,18%. Overall, Petroleum produc...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, regarding, well, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44270833333 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71688853101 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.1960209937 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228299317917 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107681507895 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138338629039 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168288811087 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2069404894 0.0819641961636 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.