The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

Essay topics:

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart provides the post-graduate plans of Anthropology students after finishing their undergrad studies, followed by the table which entails the type of employment that anthropologists are in with the different ranges of wages.

Looking from all perspectives, it is readily apparent that half of the graduate students choose to work full time according to the chart and nearly 50% of the anthropologists get the salary of more than one lakh according to the table. Regarding the chart, half of the pie is covered with full-time employees while the other half is filled up with five categories, with the part-time worker at the highest figure, 15%. Unemployed students cover 12% of the chart whilst the Master studies and unknown category have the lowest percentage, 8. In accordance with the table, only 5-10% of the postgrads have the highest income up to 5 lakhs and larger percentage of the worker ended up with the wage of 1 lakh. Seemingly, the private companies sector contributes the most in the highest salary range with 10% and government sector contributes in the lowest range of 1 lakh.

To sum up, most graduates go to the practical working environment and the wages are different depending on the job they are in.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...of the graduate students choose to work full time according to the chart and nearly 50% o...
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Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... wage of 1 lakh. Seemingly, the private companies sector contributes the most in the high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00485436893 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85130027903 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0572981364 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.285714286 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152665943552 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713098589106 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743796401087 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118519419089 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724664397699 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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