The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years summarise the information by selecting and reporting t

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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The given figures illustrate the information regarding different sort of job along with ranges of wages of Anthropology graduated candidates over a five years work after the graduation from a university. Units are measured in dollar.

It is apparent from the diagram large number
of students were involved in full time job((52%) while in the work,the least percentage of graduated students were having part time work & postgrad Study compared to full time postgrad study and not known jobs.

With refrence to piechart, 15% of students had hand on part time work while 12% of them were remained unemployed. According to the table, Freelance consultants worker were generating good income as per their job's working hours (5% from $25000-$100,00 + ). In the same way, government secter had paid 5% of 25,000 - 49,999 and 15% of 74999 and 30%. of 75,000 -99,999 and ultimetly 50%. of about 100,000 amounts as per job types to their employe.

Similarly, in the private companies part time job holder had get 10% of (25,000 - 49,999) in their Salay and 35%. of (50,000 -74,999) in full time jobs. In the same way part time along with grad stuty student had generated the income of 25%. (75000- 99999) 30% (above 100,000 ) amounts was paid to fall-time along with postome study studen in private companies.

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Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ge number of students were involved in full time job52% while in the work,the least perc...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ed in full time job52% while in the work,the least percentage of graduated students ...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ntage of graduated students were having part time work & postgrad Study compared to full ...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... time work & postgrad Study compared to full time postgrad study and not known jobs. W...
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Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...o piechart, 15% of students had hand on part time work while 12% of them were remained un...
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Line 6, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... jobs working hours 5% from 5000-00,00 + . In the same way, government secter had ...
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Line 6, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...,000 - 49,999 and 15% of 74999 and 30%. of 75,000 -99,999 and ultimetly 50%. of ab...
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Suggestion: Of
...%. of 75,000 -99,999 and ultimetly 50%. of about 100,000 amounts as per job types ...
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Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Similarly, in the private companies part time job holder had get 10% of 25,000 - 49,9...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...vate companies part time job holder had get 10% of 25,000 - 49,999 in their Salay a...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...vate companies part time job holder had get 10% of 25,000 - 49,999 in their Salay a...
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Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...25,000 - 49,999 in their Salay and 35%. of 50,000 -74,999 in full time jobs. In th...
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Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...eir Salay and 35%. of 50,000 -74,999 in full time jobs. In the same way part time along w...
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Line 8, column 166, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...,999 in full time jobs. In the same way part time along with grad stuty student had gener...
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Line 8, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of 25%. 75000- 99999 30% above 100,000 amounts was paid to fall-time along with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, similarly, so, while, sort of, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99069767442 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50939968456 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.87182876 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975840979741 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346148143872 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604334366018 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702952612589 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069650265241 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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