The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given pie chart depicts what Anthropology graduates had done after their graduation from the undergraduate course. The table illustrates how much they have earned in work after five years. Overall, it can be seen from the chart that more than a half of Anthropologists worked in a full-time job, regarding the table, half of those who worked in the government sector had the highest salary.
To begin with, 52% of the Anthropology students graduation worked in full-time job, while only 5% of them worked as a part-time ortho along with a post to graduate study. While 15% of the graduates were employed in a part-time profession, 12% were unemployed. an equal percentage (8%) for those who decided to pursue their full-time postgraduate program, and those who are not known what they have done.
Moreover, there are three types of employment that Anthropologists good work which are freelancer consultants, in a government sector, or in private companies. 40% of freelancer consultants earned $100,000 + after five years experience wherease the other 60% were devided into 5% for $25.000-49.000, 15% for $50.000-74.999, and 40% for $75.000-99.000. Compared to those who worked for a government sector, half of them had a salary of $100.000 and plus. Yet, %30 had earned $75,000-99.999, %5 had $25.000-49,999, and 15% had $50.000-74,999. For those who were employed in private companies, %35 of them had $50.000-74,999; however, %10 of them gained $25.000-49.999. The rest of them were 25% who earned %75.000-99.999 and 30% for $100.000 and higher.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ho are not known what they have done. Moreover, there are three types of emplo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16064257028 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15726717273 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0775573594 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136765931844 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069898450189 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793105278779 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133298399583 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105478476451 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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