some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . discuss both the views and give your opinion?
Nowadays, advertising has become increasingly a controversial subject. While some individuals believe that the advertisements are extremely successful at convincing us to purchase products; however, others think that they are no longer useful and no one now is considering them. In my opinion, I believe that the advertisings are no more used in our process of deciding which things to buy.
On the one hand, there is a number of people who are persuaded by the advertising they see whether online or in their real life. This is due to the fact that those adverts are displayed in a very good marketing way that could affect consumers’ ideas about buying items. For example, a recent report by a massive company in Canada shows that their sales have just doubled after they started to put advertising everywhere for their products.
On the other hand, unlike those consumers, others think that advertisement is useless these days, also, folks are no longer interested in. This could be because of the increasing numbers of adverts everywhere. In addition, after many trials of being persuaded by them, some individuals discovered that the advertisement is not always marketing the products correctly. For instance, a recent statistic has shown that %55 of customers bought things depending on their adverts and were shocked after they got the products that were not the same as it was told.
In conclusion, these days, people’s opinions about advertisements are splited into two opinions whether they are persuaded by them or not. In my opinion, I believe that why people are no longer paying attention to adverts is reasonable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14981273408 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90747691075 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1720644235 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284671260236 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103237443391 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844618398052 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180484671972 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847015224592 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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