The chart show the info about the use of Internet in 5 coutries in Europe in 2000

Essay topics:

The chart show the info about the use of Internet in 5 coutries in Europe in 2000

The given two pictures illustrate the percentage of Internet users and typical time citizen using online shopping of 5 feature Europe nations in 2000.
It can be seen from the first graph, it is clearly evident that Sweden's population has highest users. Inaddition, the average time of the UK's people is accounted for considerably in the second pie chart.
The proportion of Internet users in Sweden was highest, at 35%, while the figure for the UK was significantly lower, around 20%. German's and France's people made up 15% and 10% in the total of 5 countries Internet users. At the same time, only 5% of Internet users in Spain.
In the same period reseach, the UK's citizen uses online shopping was highest, roughly 32 %, whereas the rate for Sweden was gradually lower, around 28%. Then, the average of individuals in France and German accounted for about 20% and 16% respcectively. By constract, Spain has only 4% in the total usual spending on shopping on the Internet per person of certain countries were chosen.

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Average: 7 (7 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...clearly evident that Swedens population has highest users. Inaddition, the average time of ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of certain countries were chosen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93641618497 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60138585178 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.908915224 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152552088522 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611079848824 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512865126698 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978598470721 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598453396616 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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