The chart show information about the number of kilometres traveled In a average month and distribution of vehicles types in Britain
The provided line chart illustrate the information of kilometres traveled and purpose of travelling whereas pie chart reveals data of mode of transport in 1990 and 2010
As it is presented in the line chart that individuals travelled for transport and delivery in 1990 was around 6 thousand however in next five years it shoot up and peak at almost 8 thousand whereas in later years it exhibited a downfall of 2000km.In terms of commenting it experienced a topsy turrey trend and stabled at 3000 km throughout the period similarly in personal travel it remains stable in first fifteen years and in the following years it witnessed a slight incline
On the other hand,pie chart reveals that in 1990 use of cars was more as compared in 2010 by 4% moreover in 1990 one forth of people preferred to travel by trucks but in next twenty year it rose to 30%.In addition to 6%of buses was used in 1990 which show a slight downfall to 5% in 2010.Lastly in case of motorcycle it was 4% in 1990 although it decline to 3%in upcoming years
Overall, it is explicitly seen that major purpose for travel throughout period was transport and delivery however cars were used the most for moving from one place to another
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'shoots'?
Suggestion: shoots
... thousand however in next five years it shoot up and peak at almost 8 thousand wherea...
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Suggestion: In
...years it exhibited a downfall of 2000km.In terms of commenting it experienced a to...
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...ssed a slight incline On the other hand,pie chart reveals that in 1990 use of cars ...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...veals that in 1990 use of cars was more as compared in 2010 by 4% moreover in 1990...
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Suggestion: In
... but in next twenty year it rose to 30%.In addition to 6%of buses was used in 1990...
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Suggestion: Lastly
...ch show a slight downfall to 5% in 2010.Lastly in case of motorcycle it was 4% in 1990...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'declines'?
Suggestion: declines
...otorcycle it was 4% in 1990 although it decline to 3%in upcoming years Overall, it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66197183099 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60140501918 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544600938967 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 213.0 22.4926829268 947% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 993.0 112.824112599 880% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 213.0 22.9334400587 929% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 97.0 5.23603664747 1853% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118507583415 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118507583415 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891624012461 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770268092987 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 107.0 13.2329268293 809% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -127.8 61.2550243902 -209% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.0 10.3012195122 815% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.39 8.06136585366 216% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.4329268293 507% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 87.2 10.9970731707 793% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 11.0658536585 524% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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