The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000

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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The graph illustrates the proportion of gross domestic products from IT and Service industry that generated in United Kingdom from 1992 to 2000. The units are measured as a percentage of GDP.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is crystal clear that IT industry produced majority of inventions than Service industry from the beginning up to 2000.
In 1992, IT industry generated more than 6% of new products with compared to service industry which provides only 4%. By 1994, the products of both sectors rose approximately more than 1%. By 1996, the quantity of IT production had a slight decline at around 7.9% and on the other hand service sector witnessed an upward trend around 7%. It is evident that the IT productions were dramatically climbed up to 12% by 1998 and moreover service industry produced approximately 7.6% products. The productions of IT industry increased gradually and ended up peeking 15% by 2000 and furthermore, we can see that 8.1% of products produced from service sector as well.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05952380952 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83673265469 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9314917455 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139431926176 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719982151808 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710063342524 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138772885647 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749907144472 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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