The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain

Essay topics:

The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain

The chart compares the time of doing household chores among male and female in Great Britain.
Overall, it is evident that women spend more time on doiing most of household tasks while men only spend more time on gardening/pet care and maintenance odd things.
Cooking, baking and washing up are tasks that costs the most time of women a day, at 74 minutes per day while these tasks just costs men 30 minutes per day. 58 minutes is the time that women spend on cleaning/house tidying, that is much higher than men who spend just 13 minutes daily. To take care of children and clothes washing/ironing/sewing, women spend 45 and 25 minutes per day respectively, which is higher than 20 minutes and 2 minutes of men, respectively.
Most of the time of men (49.5 minutes per day) is spend on gardening/pet care while women just spend 21 minutes on doing these tasks. Men spend more time on maintenance odd things than women, 26 minutes per day compared with 9.5 minutes per day.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...the time of men 49.5 minutes per day is spend on gardening/pet care while women just ...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asks. Men spend more time on maintenance odd things than women, 26 minutes per da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67441860465 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80743527208 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482558139535 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3181632057 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744426720929 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584158178902 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930631125948 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943936716855 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107292849173 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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