The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain
The bar chart gives the information about the percentage of 6 types of housework that both of gender did in the UK. Units are measured in minutes person per day.
Overall, women were responsible for the most of household tasks than men except gardening, pet care and maintenance odd jobs. The females spent most time cooking, baking and washing up in comparison to men’s tasks were gardening and pet care.
As observed from the chart, woman cooked, baked and washed up as housework much more than man (around 70% with females and 30% with males). The number was similar in terms of cleaning and tidying the house, there was a significant difference between the females and males (nearly 60% and above 10% respectively). Women also care for children and play with them more than men about two times. This figure was bigger in terms of washing, ironing and sewing clothes, it was around 3 times, about 28% with women and just 2% with men.
But men also spent more time than women gardening, caring for the pet and maintenance odd jobs. The percentage of man is exactly 50% in gardening and caring pet and in maintenance odd jobs, it was around 20% in comparison with those of women were 20% and 10% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of women were 20% and 10% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75117370892 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46729584095 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544600938967 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.787431773 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063475478213 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297532480953 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416425664911 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493677885435 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414159468401 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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