The chart shows information about heart attacks by ages and genders in the USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given column graph compares the number of men and women belong to different age groups who suffer heart disease every year in United States of America.
Overall, it is clear that men are more under influence of heart disease every year as compare to their counterparts. It can be seen that, number of heart patients incline with growing age.
To begin with, in case of younger age group 29-44, the figure for men who are victim of heart disease is observed to be 123, 000 annually ;however women are neglible in proportion. It is interesting to note that number of heart patients witnesses a increase with the growth in age. There is rapid incline in Figure of male patients upto age of 45-64 and reaches at 424,000 every year.
Probing further, only 136 thousand of women prone to heart disease who aged between 45 to 64 years. Surprisingly, the number of male and female patients reach at 440,000 and 374,000 respectively in age of 65 or above. Female patients of oldest category of 65+ is highly greater as compared to earlier age groups.
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The given column graph compares the number of men ...
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...elong to different age groups who suffer heart disease every year in United State...
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...t disease every year as compare to their counterparts. It can be seen that, numbe...
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...terparts. It can be seen that, number of heart patients incline with growing age...
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... be seen that, number of heart patients incline with growing age. To begin w...
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...ger age group 29-44, the figure for men who are victim of heart disease is observed t...
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... group 29-44, the figure for men who are victim of heart disease is observed to ...
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... men who are victim of heart disease is observed to be 123, 000 annually ;howev...
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...eart disease is observed to be 123, 000 annually ;however women are neglible in ...
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...heart patients witnesses a increase with the growth in age. There is rapid incli...
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... with the growth in age. There is rapid incline in Figure of male patients upto ...
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...igure of male patients upto age of 45-64 and reaches at 424,000 every year. ...
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...pto age of 45-64 and reaches at 424,000 every year. Probing further, only 13...
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...bing further, only 136 thousand of women prone to heart disease who aged between ...
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... heart disease who aged between 45 to 64 years. Surprisingly, the number of male...
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...o 64 years. Surprisingly, the number of male and female patients reach at 440...
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...years. Surprisingly, the number of male and female patients reach at 440,000 a...
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.... Surprisingly, the number of male and female patients reach at 440,000 and 37...
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... of male and female patients reach at 440,000 and 374,000 respectively in age...
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...ach at 440,000 and 374,000 respectively in age of 65 or above. Female patients...
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...,000 and 374,000 respectively in age of 65 or above. Female patients of oldest ...
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...d 374,000 respectively in age of 65 or above. Female patients of oldest categor...
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...n age of 65 or above. Female patients of oldest category of 65+ is highly greater as co...
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...ldest category of 65+ is highly greater as compared to earlier age groups.
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...ighly greater as compared to earlier age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73369565217 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42583151803 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7630113322 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929332922713 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477151179548 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172969219078 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649484471547 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00832200888108 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.