The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given You should write at least 150 words

The graph compares the figure of mobile phones and landlines for every 100 people in seven Europe countries.

Looking at the chart, it is immediately obvious that the proportion of mobile phones saw a significant growth from Canada to Italy, while the number of landlines have a fluacted trend from Canada to Italy.

In Canada, the figure of mobile phones accounted for 38 peoples, which countries reach the lowest point overall, whereas Italy have the most mobile phones users, at 90 peoples. The number of mobile phones consumer reach at approximately 87 peoples in Sweden, which people use 1,8 times as much as the US, at 48 peoples. Mobile phones users in Germany, Denmark and UK are 75 peoples, 84 peoples and 85 peoples respectively.
The landlines consumers accounted for 85 peoples in Denmark, which hit the highest point in seven countries, although the number hit the lowest point is 42 peoples in Italy. The proportion of landlines users is the same people as the Sweden, at 70 peoples. People using landlines in Canada is lower than Germany, at 65 peoples, while 58 peoples is the figure of landlines consumer in UK.

Votes
Average: 6.4 (15 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 100 people in seven Europe countries. Looking at the chart, it is immediately...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57034284219 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6003472207 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247232825357 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132916860606 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029600086866 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167846211384 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318444030235 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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