The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer s total car sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer’s total car sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010.

The bar charts give information about the proportion of car producer’s total car sales in 4 areas between 2006 and 2010.
Overall, while European and Asian regions accounted for the highest proportion in the 2006-2010 period, the lowest areas were South America and North America. Besides, although South America experienced some fluctuation in 2007 and 2008, its total sale had no a change between 2006 and 2010.
In 2006, 35% of the total car sales was contributed by Asian, which was higher than that of Europe, at only 25%. Although there were some fluctuations between 2007 and 2008, the total car sale of Europe dramatically peaked in 2010, at precisely 50%, which was higher than that of Asia, at merely 30% at the same time.
Additionally, the number of cars sold in North America accounted for 29%, compared to 11% of South America. In spite of undergoing some decreasing trends in 2007 and 2008, the figure of South America still maintained at 11% in 2010, while that of North America drastically dropped to 9%.

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Average: 7.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, still, while, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91379310345 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5797172728 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8839556277 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271015599219 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149925624878 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110759364938 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19850249066 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122736607963 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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