The chart shows the proportion of graduetes from Bluesky University in 2006 entering different employment sectors.
The pie chart demonstrates the work choices of Bluesky University in 2006.
According to the graph percentages who worked in each of different sectors offer finishing university. As regards all of the most popular choices.
Well under half the students went into industry, with service industries attracting more Bluesky graduates than any other part by far-almost a thirs. Moreover, about half that number took jooles in manufacturing, with 16.3% percentages. The second highest percentage politics and public services were the most popular choice, accounting for nearly a fifth of graduaty. Just over 12% went into politics and a further 5.6% chose the civil service.
On the other hand career choices were education about 15% and two others: the arts, entertainment and media, with 7.8% and science and technology with around 7.3%.
Overall, the least popular choice contained work in the nonprofit sector and careers in sport, both of qhich were chosen by well under 1% of graduates. To sum up, 2.8% entered work in othwr unspecified sectors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent sectors offer finishing university. As regards all of the most popular choices...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... offer finishing university. As regards all of the most popular choices. Well under hal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, well, as regards, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34131736527 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70609661185 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3585183078 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11442270844 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485178613524 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771398621265 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836940268219 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928634815542 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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