The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

There are two graphs which reveal the information regarding travel to and from Uk, and the second is about the most popular countries for United kingdom's residents to visit around the world.
We can see that the first line graph shows the information about Uk.
In 1979 visitors came in Uk is around ten million, although Uk about 12 million citizens visit around the world during that year the difference is not higher. Overall, the graph trend was not changed over 20 years. At 179 to 1986 the increasing ratio is almost identical travel to and from Uk but after Uk citizen visits out of the country had incereased then visiter came in Uk.
The topmost attractive countries to UK residents are France and Spain, visited by around 20 million, France 11 million, and Spain 9 million. The other three countries USA, Greece and Turkey, is visited by two, three, and four million respectively. The most notable thing is France is the most popular while Turkey is less popular in the UK as a tourist place.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., three, and four million respectively. The most notable thing is France is the mos...
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Line 4, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s popular in the UK as a tourist place.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71590909091 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39101278724 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6226919922 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350959300692 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171024992578 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124318625344 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240640918983 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849493792 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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