The charts below give information on the ages of people when they gotmarried in oneparticularcountry in1996 and2008.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008.

The bar charts illustrate the percentage of residents getting married accross a range of 6 age groups according to their gender in a certain nation in 1996 and 2008.

Overall, in both given years, women appeared to marry ealier than men. Besides, whereas the largest figure of females was at 25-29 age group, that of males was at 30-34.

In 1996, only 1 per cent of females belonging to 16-19 age group getted married. The number increased sharply when they reached the age of 20 to 24 at 6 per cent prior to peaking at just below 12 per cent in the third age agroup. It then saw a steady decrease to just 2 per cent when they were 40 years old or more. After over a decade, the figures for females remained relatively stable. Notably, the rate of married women under 20 dropped to half of that in the previous year examined.

In terms of male data, in the first years surveyed, they tended to get married when they turned 20 to 24, at just above 20 per cent. The number soared with age and reached its peak in the third and fourth age groups at approximately 9 per cent before experiencing a drop in the age of 35 or higher. Although this tendency seemed to unchange in 2008, the vast majority of males marrying fell into the fourth age group, at nearly 11 per cent, rised by 2 per cent compared to that of the year 1996.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, so, then, third, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36546184739 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26409874491 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9306787231 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133657449178 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551662597391 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470667969866 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823266213085 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365285674525 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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