The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided charts describe some differences between the average proportion of typical meals in a day of three categories of nutrients. These things maybe not good for the health of people if they have eaten too much in the USA.
At a glance at the pie charts, almost all people eat a few nutrients at the first meal of the day. Which makes people did not have the energy enough to work effectively whole a day. Conversely, the Americans used the food contained unhealthy nutrients for the last meals, particularly in dinner and snacks.
According to the given pie charts, it is clear that the percentage of sodium, saturated fast, and added sugar for breakfast had no difference at 14%, 16%, 16% in order. At lunch, the Americans seem to consume all those nutrients in every meal, and accounted for 29%, 26%, 19% in turn. People do not care too much about meals for breakfast and lunch.
On the last day, residence in America may behave more free time to eat a lot of foods contained nutrients than other meals in a day. The meal in dinner, the percentage of nutrients involving sodium, saturated fat and added sugar was at 43%, 37%, and 23% respectively. sodium accounted for the greatest percentage. After dinner, nutrients for sodium occupied for the smallest proportion at just 14% while added sugar had the highest percentage at 42%, and the following that the percentage of saturated fat with 21%. The results from the supplied pie charts can be shown that it is easily obese in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nutrients at the first meal of the day. Which makes people did not have the energy en...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sodium
... was at 43%, 37%, and 23% respectively. sodium accounted for the greatest percentage. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75572519084 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55470991353 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4806915768 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8461538462 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179446353042 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676159739253 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342710988995 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11890401468 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311401366787 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.