The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts demonstrate the propotion of different nutritious substances adopted by Americans. in four periods of daytime. Overall, sodium and saturated fat are mainly consumed in the dinner, while extra sugar added to one's body largely from snacks as an addition meal, which apart from three main dishes.
One interesting point is that all nutrients mentioned share similar figures at the two earlier meals. The percentages of absorbed lipit and sweet substance for breakfast each account for nearly a fifth, whereas that of sodium is slightly lower, with 14%. It can be clearly seen that in the USA, people tend to have more balanced nutritious meal for lunch. Sodium, saturated fat and added sugar's percentages make up 29%, 26% and 19% respectively, which are almost the standard amount of necessary substances.
In contrast, the figures show major differences for the last two categories. For dinner, Americans likely to adopt sodium and lipid as majority substances for dinner, which take account for approximately 40% of total for the former and 43% for the latter. Meanwhile, the sweetness in taste of the dinner is at a low figure, only 23%, which provide healthier dishes. But that flavor in snacks is extremely high, nearly a half of the sugar consumption in a day, far more than the amount of sodium and saturated fat in the addition meal, account for nearly 20% for each.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the dinner, while extra sugar added to ones body largely from snacks as an addition...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, apart from, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03017241379 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63186351448 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7107334968 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.090909091 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978526185545 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388521994948 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273377111577 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766706631726 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030555361515 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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