The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.
The given charts illustrate the increase in population growth of largest cities in the world during the different period of time.
It is clear from the graph that, Tokyo was the city with the highest population over 15 million in 1970 whereas, in comparison with Jakarta, the population was almost 2.5 million in same year. In 1990, Tokyo again outnumbered all cities in terms of population with almost 24 million. However, there was increase in population in Jakarta to 9 million during 1990. By 2015, Tokyo topped the chart with almost 28 million people whereas New York was at bottom with over 15 million people.
During 1950, New York was the city with highest population of 12.5 million where both Paris and Moscow with population at 5.3 million. By 2010, Tokyo came into the chart with 27.6 million and was highest.
The world population in urban areas was at 2 billion in 1990 which was almost double in 2010 whereas the rural population was steady in its growth and reached to 3.2 billion.
Overall, it is clear that the world population is increasing day by day and Tokyo was the only city with the highest population in every period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the largest'.
Suggestion: of the largest
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ities in the world during the different period of time. It is clear from the graph that, T...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
... During 1950, New York was the city with highest population of 12.5 million where both P...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82914572864 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3503947425 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3418069969 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236243275252 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135968130014 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816386398274 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186599825937 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686110430951 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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