The supplied multi-segmented graphical representation delineates the modes of transportation for travellers to university for the purpose of study and work in the years 2004 and 2009.
Considering, the significant changes which took place, it is clearly evident that the construction of a new bus stop at the university in 2006 attracted alot of passengers which resulted in an increase of bus travellers by 13% in 2009. Despite, car was the most popular source of transportation in 2004 which comprised over half of the commuters,with the car parking getting knocked down,there was a surprising decline of about 23%noted in the same by 2009.
On the other hand, bicycle riders comprised to be 9% in 2004 ,which rose by 7% within the another half decade. However, the travellers seemed to be least interested in travelling by train and walking throughout the period in which moderate increment of about 1-2% was apparent till 2008
Overall it is quite conspicuous that by 2004 people were mostly interested in travelling by cars which shifted to public bus by 2009. However, the travellers preferred travelling by train and walking the least.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...ich comprised over half of the commuters,with the car parking getting knocked down,th...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ith the car parking getting knocked down,there was a surprising decline of about 23%no...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...icycle riders comprised to be 9% in 2004 ,which rose by 7% within the another half...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1168146355 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8601082086 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256192516146 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132936935797 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127422754321 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18277491665 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136838097641 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.