The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words
The bar chart illustrates information about the most famous movies by genre among women and men in the USA in 2010, while the pie chart provides data about the percentage of ticket sold for different types of movies.
Overall, it can be seen that action movies were the preferred type of movies among men, while a very significant number of women enjoyed romantic comedy more than men. Around half of people bought ticket for action movies in 2010.
As regards the first graph, about 20% of men and women opted for comedy whereas the number who liked western fell to approximately 10% , which was a significant 50% drop, in relative terms. In contrast, just around one quarter of men preferred action movies, while only 25% of women enjoyed them. On the other hand, romantic comedy, which approximately 30% of women enjoyed, were 6-times more popular with women than they were with men. As the second chart suggests, action movies got 49% of ticket sales among all movie categories while 24% was took by the comedy genre. Finally, 12%,10% and 5% were bought by the romantic, comedy and other types correspondingly.
In conclusion, there was a direct link between the popularity of movies and the percentage of ticket sold in 2010 in the United States.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, whereas, while, as regards, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88785046729 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46574805419 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6121599555 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 5.23603664747 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213223873024 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945620289403 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717252322811 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150793889889 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782383006341 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.