The charts below show the percentage of five kind of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of five kind of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The given pie charts illustrate, information about the percentage of five types of books which sold by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012.

In 1972, the percentage of adult fiction books was one fifth which sold by the bookseller, in 1992, it rose by 5% and in 2012, it was 45%.the proportion of children's fiction books was 20% and in 1992 and 2012, it was a 22% and 25% respectively. 50% travel books sold by a bookseller in 1972, in 1992 the percentage rose 3 however, it is 8% decreased in 2012.
Moving further towards details, in 1972, 20% biography books sold by bookseller it declined 5%, in 1992, as well as in 2012, it again 7% drop out in 1972 and 1992 the proportion of books which related to other topics sold by bookseller was 25 and 20 respectively as well as it 8% decreased in 2012.
Overall, it is evident that the percentage of adult fiction and children's fiction was increased in given years whereas the percentage of biography, travel and other books was dropped out.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56741573034 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70504888748 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438202247191 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5839631401 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.6 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364430674045 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254883072384 0.103423049105 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112587639669 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258628980445 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112250884032 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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