The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts compare the proportion of water consumption for 3 purposes in 6 parts of the earth.

Overall, water dominantly used for agriculture in four parts of the world with the exception of Europe and North America, which was mainly consumed for industrial purposes.

Among the 4 areas that used water primarily for agriculture, Central Asia had by far the highest percentage at 88%, and the next biggest consumer of water for this reason, is Africa, with 84%. The figure for South-East Asia is higher by 10%, as compared in South America at 71%.

Europe and North America are the leading areas which allocated the biggest proportion of water for industrial use, with approximately half of their total water supply. By contrast, Africa and Central Asia both comprised the smallest percentage of water allocation for this at just under a tenth. With regard to domestic purposes, South America consumed the most overall at nearly a fifth.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... agriculture in four parts of the world with the exception of Europe and North America, which was mai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10191082803 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63728112539 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3616305975 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288943858763 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141741498961 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846479346652 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195390949269 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197736141168 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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