The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The above pie diagrams give information about certain proportion of water for diverse reasons which have been used by six various regions in the world.

Overall, it is clear that although the main usage of water in Europe and North America were in industrial zone, the other 4 areas (South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia) consumed most in agricultural part.

In two regions of Europe and North America, the great amount of water of 53% and 48% were consumed in industrial zones respectively. Also, proportion of 32 in Europe and 39 in North America were allocated in agriculture. In South America 71% of water were consumed in agriculture and the other 29 proportion were devoted into 19% in domestic and 10% in industry.

On the opposite, 3 similar areas which had the high percentage of water usage in agricultural zone, dedicated average of 85% in the mentioned category. In addition, both South East Asia and Central Asia utilized the same percentage of 7 in domestic zone. Finally, Africa used its own water sources 9% in domestic area, and the other one in seven in manufacturing.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71168105131 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0888411187 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167609018131 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782449111465 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621448082799 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112695355082 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684588643933 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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