The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts depict the proportion of the amount of water which is utilized for industry, agriculture, and domestic in six areas in the world. The most striking feature is that water is dominantly used for agriculture, expect in North America and Europe.

According to the charts, it can be seen that the highest percentage of water used is for agriculture by over 80% in Central and South East Asia, South America, as well as in Africa. In other regions, North America and Europe, around a half of water portion is used for Industry. In contrast, the proportion of water which is used for industry in all other regions is only no more than 12%. In terms of water which is used for domestic, it is noticeable that South East Asia, North America, and Europe use water by 7%, 15%, and 13% respectively. It becomes the lowest percentage on the each region.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...other regions is only no more than 12%. In terms of water which is used for domest...
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'well', 'in contrast', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.303370786517 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.123595505618 0.116061578633 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561797752809 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393258426966 0.0366838410393 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0168539325843 0.0131127313244 129% => OK
Prepositions: 0.174157303371 0.155750635184 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0393258426966 0.0379272487307 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5670290528 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00561797752809 0.0210936926555 27% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730337078652 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00561797752809 0.00437022459523 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168539325843 0.00967000014798 174% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 857.0 1161.00487805 74% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63815789474 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.282894736842 0.337110787985 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230263157895 0.247514529752 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144736842105 0.171178102325 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0986842105263 0.112407865282 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5670290528 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 43.3593587969 49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7142857143 23.0094962315 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3243965404 42.9750493124 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 135.714022679 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 23.0094962315 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 44.7406015038 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.875 2.94281807926 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466628966454 0.418131533498 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.21312653441 0.181151798455 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0976320005162 0.0850326197045 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642541968538 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172956191868 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.277617883959 0.228904883108 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139787912128 0.108899403657 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.615977814896 0.367819155151 167% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.441509003443 0.316326947829 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717173058225 0.0921553760075 78% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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