The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

These pie charts illustrate the proportion of water used for three purposes in six areas (North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia) in the word.

Overall, in Europe and North America, the majority portion of the water consumed is for industrial use, while the rest of areas use their water for agricultural mostly. In addition, for all regions, the water for domestic use accounted for the least compared to industrial and agricultural use.

Regarding the countries in Asia and Africa, the percentage allocation of water use seems consistent which means they used over 80% of water for agricultural purpose, consumed about 8% for domestic purpose, and around 8% industrial purpose. Although the countries in South America consumed a nearly fourth quarter of water for agricultural activities, they used almost twice as much as water for domestic use compared to countries in Asia and Africa.

On the other hand, the countries in North America and Europe have similar proportion water use for these three purposes. The industrial water use contributed almost half of water use, agricultural water use accounted for about 35%, and the rest of portion of water use was for the domestic purpose.

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Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, while, as for, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65471279049 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3664106278 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.428571429 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358082039914 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214509814698 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047382478766 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254643922917 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277052315734 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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