The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram illustrates how electricity is generated by geothermal energy through 5 steps.

Overall, the electricity production process has 5 steps which means the cold water is processed through a few steps and then being converted to steam to produce electricity.

The first step is to have cold water pumped down into the injection well, which is approximately 4.5 km underneath the ground, and then the water goes through the geothermal zone which comprises of hot rocks. The purpose of this step is to heat up the water and store the hot water is stored in the production well. The third step is to pump the hot water from the production well up to the condenser.

The hot water is boiled in the condenser in the fourth step and then converted into the steam. The steam makes the turbine run and when the turbine is running, it also powers the generator. Therefore, the electricity is produced in the last step and then the electricity is being transported to the households.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... goes through the geothermal zone which comprises of hot rocks. The purpose of this step is ...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...water is stored in the production well. The third step is to pump the hot water fro...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...roduction well up to the condenser. The hot water is boiled in the condenser in...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...step and then converted into the steam. The steam makes the turbine run and when th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, therefore, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73713410599 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1507710487 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100110102129 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560216412361 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918357765964 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102490666322 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109506357069 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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