The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts give the information about British students who were able to speak other languages more than English at the university in England in 2000 and 2010.
According to the charts, we can see that there were 6 languages spoken rather than English: No other language, French only, German only, Spanish only, Another language and Two other languages. To deep analysis, in 2000, it is clear that Spanish only was spoken the most, following by No other language at 30% and 20%. On the contrary, German only and Two other languages were spoken the least at 10%, following by French only and Another language at 15%. As for the year 2010, Spanish only was still spoken the most, with increase from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010, following by Another language and Two other languages at 20% and 15%. In contrast, German only, as well as, French only and No other language were spoken the least at 10%.
For the details mentioned above, it is obvious that Spanish only was spoken the most while German only was spoken the least in both years.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, well, while, as for, in contrast, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66304347826 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1985291096 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461956521739 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1631581952 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30404384688 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190168149428 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17663035307 0.0843802449381 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271501065759 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249789510536 0.0819641961636 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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