The pie charts illustrate the differences in preference between full-time and part-time college students about the IT support and opening hours of a library, measured in percentage.
Overall, it is clear that a vast majority of full-time students are pleased with the library’s services in both categories. Additionally, an enormous number of part-time students satisfied with the current opening hours, whereas the opposite trend is true for the IT support system.
More specifically, while over half of full-time students who really enjoy the IT help system, with 55%, only one-fifth of part-time students satisfy with this service. In addition, the figure for participants studying full-time has a similar level of moderate satisfaction in IT assistant service with that of part-time ones, at 32% and 35% respectively.
In terms of the current opening time, a large number of students who are either part-time or full-time are solely pleased with this service, with 72% and two-thirds, accordingly. In contrast, roughly under 5% of students find it unsatisfied with the current situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...me and part-time college students about the IT support and opening hours of a library,...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...part-time college students about the IT support and opening hours of a library, measure...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... whereas the opposite trend is true for the IT support system. More specifically, w...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...s the opposite trend is true for the IT support system. More specifically, while ove...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... of full-time students who really enjoy the IT help system, with 55%, only one-fifth o...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...l-time students who really enjoy the IT help system, with 55%, only one-fifth of par...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... In terms of the current opening time, a large number of students who are either part-time or fu...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., with 72% and two-thirds, accordingly. In contrast, roughly under 5% of students ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, really, so, third, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01467530881 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8956296334 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340791184369 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184822363255 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621727961257 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238575828889 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245746688726 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.