The bar chart below illustrates the information about the value of export of a country in five different industries over a two-year period from 2015 to 2016 and the units were measured in billion dollars. The table below represents the proportional change in the export of each industry in 2016 as compared to 2015.
Overall, it is quite apparent from the table and graph that in the latter year, exports of all Gems and jewelry showed a downward trend, whereas the export-trend of all other categories was its opposite. The major source of earning of the country was by exporting petroleum and engineering products, while the textiles and engineering goods made the largest percentage in 2016.
In 2015, the earnings of the country by exporting petroleum products were just above $60 billion and within one year this earning increased by 3% and reached approximately $63 billion which were the highest-earning of all, while the second-highest source of earing in the former year was exporting of engineering products which were nearly $56 billion and in very next year the earning grew considerably by 8.5%.
The export of textiles had worth about $25 billion by 2015, while in 2016, its export increased considerably by 15.24% which was the highest proportion of all. Whereas, an increase in the export of agricultural products was 0.81 percent. Germs and jewelry is the only industry that experienced a moderate drop by 5.18% in a year, which contributed in earnings about $42 billion by 2015 and dropped its sales $2 billion by 2016.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... to 2016 and the units were measured in billion dollars. The table below represents the...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich was the highest proportion of all. Whereas, an increase in the export of agricultu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2 billion by 2015 and dropped its sales billion by 2016. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd dropped its sales billion by 2016.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85722271542 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501960784314 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.916997204 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.125 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296687091555 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159056279441 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100779762853 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200952545911 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106409671596 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... to 2016 and the units were measured in billion dollars. The table below represents the...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich was the highest proportion of all. Whereas, an increase in the export of agricultu...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2 billion by 2015 and dropped its sales billion by 2016. ...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd dropped its sales billion by 2016.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85722271542 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501960784314 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.916997204 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.125 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296687091555 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159056279441 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100779762853 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200952545911 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106409671596 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.