The charts show information about the number of kilometers travelled in an average month and the distribution of vehicle types in Britain.
The diagrams illustrate both the distances crossed according to the cause of travelling as well as the difference in vehicle kinds exploited through twenty years period from 1990 to 2010.
Regarding the line chart, the most notable feature is that transport and delivery had represented the purposes of highest coverage of distance never fell below 6000 kilometer throughout the whole period. Both commuting and personal purposes of travelling remained more or less at the same level approximately 3200 and 2000 kilometers, respectively.
The pie chart depicts that cars and trucks rated as the commonest modes of transportation in both 1990 and 2010. Yet, the percentage of cars usage had fallen by 4 %, while trucks had increased by 5 % by 2010. The other types of vehicle represented about 10 % in the whole period.
Overall, the highest kilometers crossed were for transportation and delivery services and the most used vehicles were cars and trucks in the period from 1990 until 2010.
The diagrams illustrate both the distances crossed according to the cause of travelling as well as the difference
The diagrams illustrate both the distances crossed according to the cause of travelling and the difference //both...and...
Sentence: Yet, the percentage of cars usage had fallen by 4 , while trucks had increased by 5 by 2010.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cars and usage
transport and delivery had represented the purposes of highest coverage of distance never fell below 6000 kilometer
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 810 1000
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.094 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.788 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.408 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.453 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.746 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
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