The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050

Essay topics:

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050.

The pie charts illustrates forecasts for the world manufacture by various segments. it depicts predictions of the years 2030 and 2050.

Overall, while most of the sectors, suchlike services, manufacturing, info-com tech, in the future global production will have risen by the next decades, only producing of energy and agriculture will decline. it seems that all trades projected to have slight changes.

With regards to segments of material and info-com tech fabrication, it forecasted to have a slightly increase by 6 and 3%, to 3,5 and 5,9%, respectively. Until the year 2050, the services will be the largest segment, slightly growing from 50,2% to 51,2% from the year 2030; meanwhile the second important sector will be manufacturing, that will see a lightly rise by 2,5% from 30,6% to 33,1%.

Although however, not all sectors of the world fabrication projected to increase. In contrast, only energy making will have predicted to decline from 2030 to 2050 by 2,4% from 6,7% to 4,3%. Whilst this will produce less, the agriculture will be the least significant part of the fabrication, spotting a twofold decrease to 2%.

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Average: 6.7 (30 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tech fabrication, it forecasted to have a slightly increase by 6 and 3%, to 3,5 and 5,9%, respectiv...
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...or will be manufacturing, that will see a lightly rise by 2,5% from 30,6% to 33,1%. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34972677596 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87022085502 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0819848225 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.777777778 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196280352926 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846380046937 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558720630361 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126471555681 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568507887088 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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