How tomatos ketchup made.
The picture illustrates the process of producing tomato ketchup.
Overall, as we can see, the operation involves 15 steps, which is started with picking vegetables and putting them in basket, and is finished with complex product. Evidently, while process in farms includes only two steps, ten steps could be found in manufactories and factories themself.
First of all, tomatoes are picked and put in basket and then, there is a sorting of good and bad fruits, after this procedure product is sent by a lorry to one of the factories. there takes place the process of removing from tomatoes skin and small seeds. The next step includes putting all fruits to containers.
after this, tomatoes are crushed by a special pressure. while the further stages involves adding sugar, salt and vinegar, this mixture is been boiling. When a liquid has already stood for two hours, the mixture poured from containers to special bottles.
However, labeling the product is not a last stage. It is also came through the quality control and only after that ketchup is gathered in large boxes. Subsequently, there is a transportation to supermarket and by purchasing them you can then consume tomato ketchup with hamburger and fries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, then, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1592039801 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62486732372 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0598310058 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158323356957 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647032162314 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798836852619 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110575414104 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918433520872 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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