The process of electricity generation using an artificial lagoon and tidal power

Essay topics:

The process of electricity generation using an artificial lagoon and tidal power

The diagrams represent how the electricity is generated in an artificial lagoon with tidal power.

Overall, the process includes diverse steps and could be divided into a two stages in general. Due to the fact, that the size of tide changed twice per day, nearly every 12 hours. Evidently, each production of electricity is a five step process.

When the high tide comes in the estuary, sea water flows are directed primarily to an artificial generator, where the inflow gate is opened, which allow aqua flows into a lagoon. When the tide is the highest, the lagoon is full of water. In addition, turbine with an outflow gate are closed, in case of preventing the escape of water.

In contrast, after a twelve hours the opposite process in the electricity production is starting to run with a lower tide. The estuary then is lower and more extended, as the sea water flows are have not the same route, they contrary directed and going from the artificial lagoon. Over this period, the inflow gateway is closed, so the water mark is lower; meanwhile the outflow gate is now opened and attached turbine allows the water escape from the lagoon.

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of electricity is a five step process. When the high tide comes in the estuary,...
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Line 13, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...re extended, as the sea water flows are have not the same route, they contrary direc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85858585859 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43176966921 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8842452481 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291195407408 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121248214335 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147650127683 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221537957848 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188839855302 0.0819641961636 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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