The chert below shows the resulting of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevent

Essay topics:

The chert below shows the resulting of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevent.

The bar chart illustrate in five Austaralian cities show a consequence people's coffee and tea purchase and drinking.

Overall, this five cities had the highest category went to a cofe and coffee or tea in last four weeks the avarage category this bought island coffee in last four weeks and lowest category the bought fresh coffee in last four weeks. Firstly, in Sydney this in the three section the lowest point this bought fresh coffee in last four weeks about 44% however bought island coffee in last four weeks approximately 46% but went to a cofe from coffee or tea in last four weeks than other increased dramatically about 61%. This persantage in Melboume dont significantly fulctuate but in Brisbane this persantage sightly decrease first category 34%, second section increased to 53% to 51%. In Adelaide first category slightly dropped to 50% however threeth section slightly fluctuation to 49%. In Hobart this persantage dramatically improvement 38%, 54% and 63% respectively.

In conclusion, this five cities drinking and purchasing this category went to a coffee or tea in last four weeks the lowest section bought fresh coffee in last four weeks.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13684210526 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64007051026 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426315789474 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3452875493 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118339565974 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706272833525 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718185625066 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134204899292 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539330288846 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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