Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map shows the development of the village.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Essay topics:

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

The map illustrates the development of Chorleywood, a small village near London, from 1868 to1994.

According to the map, it can be seen that Chorleywood was only a very small area and had two crossing main roads in 1868. Not until 1883 did there emerge another habitation to the south of the original small area, which was almost twice as large as the former one. In 1990, a railway, parallel with the eastbound main road, came into being. It went through the new habitation and formed an intersection with another main road as well. From 1922 to 1970, along the southern part of the newly-built railway, two large areas took shape. The year 1970 saw another great change in Chorleywood. A southbound motorway was built to link the railway and the eastbound main road. Since then, another five living areas had been founded, scattering along the motorway.

Thanks to the construction of the railway and the motorway, the size of Chorleywood expanded significantly.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69149711573 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3160888658 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855475718662 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407754064858 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745345388422 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107386802051 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10620161137 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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