The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The climograph below gives information ragarding the changes of average monthly temperature and precipitation throughout the year in the city of Kolkata.

It is clear that the monthly figures for rainfall vary considerablely, whereas temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.

Looking at graph, there is a significant climb in the monthly rainfall, with the figure for roughly 20mm in January remarkablely increasing up to about 330 mm in July and August. It then drop dramatically from its highest point to a peak of under 10 mm at year end.

The data also indicates that monthly average temperatures experience a slightly increase in the early months, going from approximately 18°C in January to reach the highest point (roughly 30°C) by April and May. However, it then fall mildly towards the end of the year, with a marked decline to around initial level (about 18 °C) in December.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (23 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drops'?
Suggestion: drops
...bout 330 mm in July and August. It then drop dramatically from its highest point to ...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...monthly average temperatures experience a slightly increase in the early months, going from approxi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
...30°C by April and May. However, it then fall mildly towards the end of the year, wit...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16981132075 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9541410075 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4831299051 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2730354362 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128543457985 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149134274551 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192447038207 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166898390336 0.0819641961636 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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