A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
To make our ecological situation better, we have to do something such as increasing the industrial and agricultural process or have the more touristic place to attract tourists from other countries. Developing country will help to open new horizons. In our country, the government has a plan to settle the plant near our city. This plan is double edged sword. I have just tried to discuss every point step by step.
First of all, having the factory in our city will cause the city to be known all over the country and have the good supply of money. After this industry, our city will exert its own products. Money from factory can be spent on accommodation of population.
Secondly, this factory will be a source of work that can diminish the rate of unemployment. Our city is not rich enough but after this plan, it can be. It will make hundreds of people to smile.
On the other hand, this factory will cause a lot of problems. As you know 3 out of 10 suffer from asthma and they can not breathe when something going wrong in the air. That is the reason, having some pollution in the air will cause them to face some problems. Having plant near the city will cause to have pollutants in the air. Also, pollution of gasses can cause the acid rain problem. Poisonous gasses such as sulfur dioxide and nitrogen dioxide will cause acid rain and this acid rain can destroy statues, kill the trees. All these are the ecological problem that we can come across with them.
In conclusion, for me being workless is better than being an ill and suffer from the disease that can’t be the cure. That is why, I am totally against of having a factory in our city.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 1.00243902439 1696% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52491694352 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34784784174 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.934913638 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.05 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079071726701 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309722832494 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276880262472 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505948468655 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120007173824 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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