Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions Discuss

Essay topics:

Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss

An organization is because of its employees. Employees and Management are the pillars of organization. Hence, higher management should include employee’s suggestion or ideas while taking decisions related to the betterment of organization.
Involving employees in organizational decision making has various advantages for both organization as well as for employees. Employee feels motivated and have positive attitude towards organization being involved in crucial decision making. This leads to better productivity and out of the box thinking attitude. It also saves money as some decision which were handled internally would have needed consultation from outside source. This develops a sense of responsibility in employees and also improves the relationship with higher management. These all leads to benefit the organization in long run.
In my current organization, a voice survey is conducted which provides anonymous platform to employees to raise their concern or opinion regarding the feedback of various organizational activities. Employees are responsible to plan extracurricular, cultural and social activities. Also, to implement a project, employee’s in depth understanding is utilized to reach on effective solution.
These things gives a purpose to employee’s work and knowledge. It also reduces the work pressure from higher management since they rely on employee’s opinion. An organization success depends on great team work, good relationship and transparent conversation between higher management and employees. Decision involvement helps to achieve all those.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (10 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...arious advantages for both organization as well as for employees. Employee feels motivated...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'give'.
Suggestion: give
...h on effective solution. These things gives a purpose to employee's work and k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, regarding, so, well, while, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 3.97073170732 504% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13777777778 4.92477711251 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52429591953 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631111111111 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2024175268 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121320823583 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400518382678 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658259665333 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876447602243 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791080433618 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 61.2550243902 52% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.74 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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