the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

Essay topics:

the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The chart illustrated the consumption of fish and flesh (which separated into chicken, beef, as well as lamb in the European Regions since 1979 to 2004).

It is clear that in every 5 years the consumption of chicken tended to increase considerably, from 150 grams per person per week to 300 grams. In contrast, beef and lamb which were the highest and the second of consumption of meat in 1979, since 1984 to 2004 the trend of it was dropped extremely. Moreover, the term of beef which is the most meat consumption in 1984 which reached around 240 per person per week, in 1989 was jumped down intensely due to the rise of chicken consumption.

Even though the trend of fish tended to declined, albeit its reduction was is not significant then the others. However, since 1979 to 1984 the volume of fish consumption always a slightly under compared to the meat expenditure.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, in contrast, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7385620915 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63666967938 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1958436059 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.23603664747 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227622465558 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124194532224 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790694935142 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174011540875 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420260683142 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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