Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. And whether u supports them or not
Today, extreme sports are on the rise. The younger generation is more inclined towards dangerous sports like extreme skiing, bungee jumping, skydiving and others just to feel that adrenaline rush. In my opinion, dangerous sports should be banned and only allowed to a moderate extent. These dangerous sports leads to accident and disturbs the ecological environment, the following essay will analyze the above points.
Most importantly, these sports leads to accident. For example, one of the greatest formula one racer Michael Schumacher was injured while skiing and is still unable to recover. In skydiving, there were several instances when the parachute wouldn’t open which lead to morbid consequences. From this, it is clearly evident that extreme sports are dangerous and leads to accident. Thus, it is obvious that extreme sports should be banned.
Another reason, it is harmful to the environment and disturbs the ecological balance. For example, skiing and bungee jumping generally happens in peaceful natural environment located remotely, overcrowding leads to increase in temperature and piling up garbage in those areas. This example, clearly shows the effect on environment of the dangerous sports. From this, it can be concluded that banning dangerous sports would help the environment.
After analyzing the areas of extreme sports, it can be concluded that it leads to accidents and have harmful effects on environment. Thus, extreme sports should be curtailed and put to stop. It is recommended that these sports should be downgraded to moderate level and take into account any misgivings to environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5219123506 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78760928815 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5508457834 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145049270419 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527803292166 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054278725844 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929901339305 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527360895625 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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