The line graph provided compares how many packages delivered by two main mail services corporations which are FedEx and TNT during the eighty-year-period from 1920 to 2000.
According to the line graph, it is apparent from the data supplied that in the first year FedEx delivered a higher number of parcels than TNT but since 1960, TNT's number of packets delivered had risen vastly and excelled FedEx during the following years.
Regarding the first forty years, it can be noticed easily that at the beginning, customers chose FedEx to transport their parcels more than TNT, in 1920 there were 15000 parcels delivered by FedEx while TNT just sent 5000. In the next twenty years, FedEx witnessed a dramatical increase in their number of delivered parcels rising for approximately 10000 packets and reaching its peak at 25000 in 1940. During the same period, TNT company could just transport around 2500 packages more. But everything had changed for the next twenty years, whereas TNT's number of parcels delivered each year continued to climb throughout the period and accounted for over 10000 in 1960, FedEx's figures hit the lowest point at the same numbers.
When it comes to the following forty years, THT's features showed an upward trend and skyrocketed to approximately 25000 parcels transported in 2000 after showing some fluctuation between 1960 and 1980. During the same period, the number of packets delivered by FedEx grew steadily before falling gradually to around 17500 packages in 2000.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18852459016 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55095873868 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561475409836 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8157173576 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.25 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213031033558 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102257270968 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561149232387 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150029226991 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462246770439 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.