The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

Essay topics:

The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

The given flow diagram highlights the information about the process of glass containers production, and the second diagram show steps in the process of recycling used glass. It is clear and coherently representation.
It can be seen that, first step of glass production with the use of sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together, and next step is melting the glass furnace to heat the glass approximately 1500 degree celsius. However, after than molten glass blowing has been created in different shapes, and lastly with help of all process glass production is ready for usage.
As far as, trend is concerned that the main five step of glass recycling. Moreover, starting step is collection of used glass. After then glass image has sorting by colour, and then washing the glass with help of washing material and (remove impurities). However, the second last step has crushing and melting. Moreover, glass moulding into new productions that is different steps of glass recycling.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'containers'' or 'container's'?
Suggestion: containers'; container's
... information about the process of glass containers production, and the second diagram show...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
..., trend is concerned that the main five step of glass recycling. Moreover, starting ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1472392638 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64870151342 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.4234032004 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167628781045 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734551420998 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550019306417 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13256871726 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355183904354 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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