The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata?

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata?

The given climate graph ilastrates the information about temperature and rainfall in Kolkata, by during a particular period of a month, the data is calibrated in millimetres and Celsius. which is clearly and coherently representing.
It can be seen that, rainfall in Kolkata during the first quarter of the year. rain precipitation has 10 to 30 millimetres. however, rainfall is increase to 100 millimeters to 325 millimeters during the year month of May to July. Apart from, all this in July has highest rainfall of the Year. moreover, precipitation of the rain in August, September and October has been 320,300 and 150 millimeters respectively.
As far as trend is concerned that, temperature of Kolkata during a particular period of month the temperature has stands the coolest condition beginning the year. after that, middle the year month in May and June highest temperature in Kolkata within 30°Celsius ,and last months of year temperature coolest with 20° celsius temperature like in start the year. futhermore, temperature in October November and December has been 20°, 25° ,28° celsius respectively.
Overall it is evident that, beginning months and last months of the year has minimum rainfall as compare to middle the year

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Which
... calibrated in millimetres and Celsius. which is clearly and coherently representing....
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Suggestion: Rain
...a during the first quarter of the year. rain precipitation has 10 to 30 millimetres....
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Suggestion: However
...precipitation has 10 to 30 millimetres. however, rainfall is increase to 100 millimeter...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
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Suggestion: has the highest
...y to July. Apart from, all this in July has highest rainfall of the Year. moreover, precipi...
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... July has highest rainfall of the Year. moreover, precipitation of the rain in August, S...
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Suggestion: After
...e coolest condition beginning the year. after that, middle the year month in May and ...
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...temperature in Kolkata within 30°Celsius ,and last months of year temperature coo...
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...thin 30°Celsius ,and last months of year temperature coolest with 20° celsius tem...
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...ius temperature like in start the year. futhermore, temperature in October November and De...
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Suggestion: ,
... November and December has been 20°, 25° ,28° celsius respectively. Overall it is...
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...m rainfall as compare to middle the year
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28787878788 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0358745078 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9854946152 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243544272479 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955010782122 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741524847645 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160757537663 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372011115066 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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