The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.
The picture illustrates a product's environmental influence over its lifetime.
Overall, between being designed and being recycled or thrown away, there are 7 steps involved in a cyclical process that allows the producer to receive feedback from the consumer to subsequently improve the product in future cycles.
Firstly, the process begins with the planning and designing of the product before materials and energy resources are collected by lorry and delivered to factories for the purpose of production. From here, products are packed and distributed by large containers to shops and supermarkets where they are, later, sold on the market.
Once the product has been bought, they are consumed by customers who, then, disposes them after utilizing it thoroughly. Another way is that customers send the product for recycling which reduces the impact on the environment and the recycled material is again used. Notably, a feedback is passed on to the design sector on their strengths and weaknesses for further improvement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
The picture illustrates a products environmental influence over its lifeti...
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Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sector on their strengths and weaknesses for further improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48125 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81485318223 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1752752235 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124354162782 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664911023913 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860385815855 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101640236677 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100198091533 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.