The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given diagram illustrates the methods of collecting updated data about weather, by Australian Bureau of Meteorology, with the aim of producing trustworthy forecasts. Overall it can be seen that there are 3 main sources and 3 major steps in attaining the final result: analysing and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and the transmission of the final data.
The first step comprises three main ways of analysing and forecasting, namely the satellite photo, the radar screen and the synoptic chart. Two main sources, a satellite and a radar are interconnected and therefore, they exchange information before sending it, through a satellite photo and on a radar screen, respectively. The synoptic chart contains details received from both the radar and the drifting buoy.
The whole information is then digitally processed and prepared for being broadcast. Finally, the forecasts are transmitted through three important media, namely the television- where it is comprised in a newsreader- radio and recorded announcement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... important media, namely the television- where it is comprised in a newsreader- r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60256410256 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11978690754 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.182025007 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101554726727 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479630262386 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683806946891 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673678512576 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388351930653 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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