The diagrams below show the design of a wind turbine and its location Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparison where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show the design of a wind turbine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant.

The given diagrams illustrate how a wind turbine is structured in order to generate electricity and its possible locations.
Overall it can be seen that the device' design is simple and there are 3 potential places for their establishment.
Looking at the details in the first pictorial, the apparatus comprises three blades made of fiberglass or wood which are placed on top of a steel tower. The wind blows towards the compounded blades and imprints them rotational movements which harness 1.5 megawatts of energy throughout a generator connected to them. The sensor placed next to the blades is controlled by a computer situated nearby the apparatus. Due to this connection, the direction and angle are maintained within the normal range.
Regarding the possible placements, there are 3 options and each has its own benefits. While a turbine mounted on the top of a hill will receive the utmost wind strengths, the one situated under the sea level does not have the same advantage but does not affect the landscape. A domestic location is also available, even though it attains a yield of only 100 kilowatts.

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Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06486486486 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80923032489 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.645719013 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954783713875 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346083375195 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460216889671 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652394016663 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052544336174 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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