The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process involved in coffee production and preparation for sale in the markets.
Overall, the procedure includes 11 steps from picking raw coffee beans to obtaining the consumer product .
Firstly,coffee beans are picked up by farmers from the fields.Next ,they are dried in the sun .After drying, they are roasted and cooled rapidly. In the next step ,the cooled beans are ground using machines.Later,the ground mixture is mixed with hot water.After this, the mixture is strained and a finer mixture is obtained .
Subsequently,the mixture is freezed then grinded.From this , it is dried in a vacuum to let the moisture out.
The recieved powder is then packed in glass jars.Consequently, the jars are labelled and sent to markets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... beans to obtaining the consumer product . Firstly,coffee beans are picked up...
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...ning the consumer product . Firstly,coffee beans are picked up by farmers from the...
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...re picked up by farmers from the fields.Next ,they are dried in the sun .After dryin...
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...icked up by farmers from the fields.Next ,they are dried in the sun .After drying,...
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...e fields.Next ,they are dried in the sun .After drying, they are roasted and cool...
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...fields.Next ,they are dried in the sun .After drying, they are roasted and cooled ra...
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...are dried in the sun .After drying, they are roasted and cooled rapidly. In the ...
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...ed and cooled rapidly. In the next step ,the cooled beans are ground using machin...
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... cooled beans are ground using machines.Later,the ground mixture is mixed with hot wa...
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...ed beans are ground using machines.Later,the ground mixture is mixed with hot water....
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... ground mixture is mixed with hot water.After this, the mixture is strained and a fin...
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...strained and a finer mixture is obtained . Subsequently,the mixture is freezed t...
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...ner mixture is obtained . Subsequently,the mixture is freezed then grinded.From th...
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...tly,the mixture is freezed then grinded.From this , it is dried in a vacuum to let t...
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...ixture is freezed then grinded.From this , it is dried in a vacuum to let the mois...
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...ved powder is then packed in glass jars.Consequently, the jars are labelled and sent to mark...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 120.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.425 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28010243452 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658333333333 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0916159893 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701821061826 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451977213736 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766933753271 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052149219233 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818914031438 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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